Narrative 1:
This is Mary, she always complained about her freckles and her bad smelling breath ;however, she believed that it is not necessary to change anything until one day, she fell in love with her classmate, Ben, and decided to impress him. She understand that in order to impress Ben, she has to improve herself by changing her appearance. Therefore, she went to supermarket for coverstick for her freckles and gum with mint. After few months of improvement, she is finally with Ben.
Narrative 2:
Mary is a girl without confident due to her freckles on her face and the bad smelling breath that can kill people. One day, her friend Ben told him that in order to become a lovely girl, she has to start working hard on improving her appearance and her awful breath. He told her that supermarket is a place for girls not only because of food, is also due to their large variety of product. He gave Mary a list of products which is Coverstick and mint gum, and told her to continuously use it for at least 2 months. After the two months hard working, she finally became a lovely girl and many boys are interested on her
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